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To you i gave my heart and love,
  But you tore them apart,
And broke me like glass in your feet,
  Shatered my hopes of a joyfull life...

Why??i ask from the night and form the stars shining bright,
  As i lay in the dark waiting for death sweet release which shall never come...

Blooded tears run from my blooded eyes,
  Why did you do it??oh did you broke me??...

I seal away into the darkness eternal,
  There i shall rot away with the pain of my broken heart,
I hope not to be saved,Only restored,
  Shall i truly be happy again??,
I do not know,Ido not hope
I only griev for the rest of my shatered life......

Hear these pained words my angel of silver light
  Take me away into a place of no pain

In your arms my angel,I finally rest away in death,
  Heart torn but still beating in your hand,
Shall you forever keep your silver wings around my beaten form and never leave,
  i need your echoing voice to feel alive,Come back my beloved angel,
Do not abandon me into the unknown and take me with you,
  To heaven or hell may your path lead take me with you,
Take me wit you its all i wish cary me in your arms and let me fade away,
  Into oblivion and peace atlast.....
Well...i wrote it out of emotion...for once my poem is actually writen out of an emotion rather than out on spurr of the moment....i wish not to be critisesed for writing this, nor am i asking anyones understanding after all...im a loveless soul wondering underneath the blacksky not a star to guide me and my fragile heart.....too many times i have fallen and risen again only to be crushed again by myself and my foolishness......*sigh*....enjoy the poem how ever my friends as i say my Arrivederchis for nwo escorted by Miternacht song depressive enough for my mood.............
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:iconashthaniel:
Ashthaniel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Loved the same girl for 3 years and she never gave a damn...."As i lay in the dark waiting for death sweet release which shall never come..." Thats how i feel right now.
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Hope you'll get over it, i know i did, but then again, i did the ultimately most lame thing ever and wrote a poem ^^; kind of embarrassed about it now, but if it helps others, i'm glad <3
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KittySib Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*smiles at you brokenly* your words are very striking. I cannot pretend to understand your situation, but I can relate a little...
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
ah ^^; somebody comments on a work from years and years ago ^^ thank you for it, but i've grown from that and look forward, somewhat, into the future over yonder.¨

Take care now ~Kain
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rxr4eva Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2008
beautiful absoulutly beautiful. i understand that pain yet i still love him
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:iconedward101lover:
Edward101lover Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2008  Hobbyist
i like the idea, but the poem itself is a little wrong, you have to watch out on the verb tenses you use and the convections,....
don't take it the wrong way.....i love it
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008
it is good thing i don't concider any critique bad.
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:iconedward101lover:
Edward101lover Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008  Hobbyist
oh well then okay that was my opinion
btw still love it
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
i know, i appresiate it
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:iconedward101lover:
Edward101lover Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008  Hobbyist
:D
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
^-^ PIZZAAAA!!!!
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:iconedward101lover:
Edward101lover Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008  Hobbyist
why pizza?
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2008
i ate pizza at that moment
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BibiBond Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008
I feel you. I really do. This is deep.
If there was one thing I could remove from the world it would be heartbreak..
but then again, we wouldn't be as strong as we are, would we?
You will get through this, I know, because I am following your path as well.
:/
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008
i quotion my ability to walk on that road anymore, i fear i've already given-up on it.... but thank you regardless to that and hope you'll be fine
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:iconbibibond:
BibiBond Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008
Awe, well thank you :)
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
you're most welcome
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:iconbibibond:
BibiBond Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
:D
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
^^
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:iconbadmonkey911:
badmonkey911 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005
@_@ wow veyr deep alot better then a lot of mine :faint: :handshake:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
THATS A LIE!!!!!!!!.....:faint:....:handshake:
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:iconbadmonkey911:
badmonkey911 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
NO IT NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im work is mostly crap ! LOl :w00t:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005
lol^¨ NO YOU DONT
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Vahn-Alexander Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2005
Very beautiful......very sad........I wish there was something I could do.....something that could bring you comfort...... all i can do though is be there for you.....and listen...... I do care about you.......I really do.... :blackrose:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2005
im gonnafuckign delete that poem....grrr*:stab: s it*
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:iconvahn-alexander:
Vahn-Alexander Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2005
no dont *clings* I like it :blackrose:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
aww....*puts the knife away*i cant stab it while your on the way....damn lucky poem>.<.-.................^^
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:iconvahn-alexander:
Vahn-Alexander Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005
:hug:s him too :blackrose:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
*upon being hugged clings as tightöy as he can without hurting*
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:iconvahn-alexander:
Vahn-Alexander Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
ack lol *hangs on all happy* :blackrose:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005
hmm..i got a kickass clothdesign but i cant DRAW it...WAAAAAh...*cries*
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thy-stalker Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
hey bro...and yes..i know...i'm gonna go to bed...in a few mins...anyways...:hug: i personally like this poem a lot..and i hope that u dun mind if i want to fav it...talk w/ ya soon...i hope...

~ with love ur little sis ^_^
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
go ahead fave it^^
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:iconmiroku7airith:
Miroku7Airith Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
I see how it is very emotional! It is beautiful
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
yeah...that it is..if you say so:hug:
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:iconmiroku7airith:
Miroku7Airith Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2005
I do! lol
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
YAY!!!!.....^^
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:iconmiroku7airith:
Miroku7Airith Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
:D :hug:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2005
^^....thats cute lol^^
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Dark-Lady-Veerle Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
awwwww :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: if.... you need anything....anything at all... i'm here.... even if you want to talk..... i'm here and always will be.
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
thank you.....*sigh*
im just sick and tired....
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:icondark-lady-veerle:
Dark-Lady-Veerle Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
*hugs him trying to comfort him the best she can* your very welcome
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
:cries:.......
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Dark-Lady-Veerle Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
:hug:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
¨^^:glomp:
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TigerStripedTeaPot Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
Awww noes!!!!! :glomp: Poor azrael :'( :crying:

I Hope you deel better soon I really do! :hump:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
mmm...:hug:*cling* :cries:
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:iconazrael-kun:
Azrael-kun Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
:hug:..:lick:...:hump:^^...feeling much better now...ty^^
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TigerStripedTeaPot Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2005
Yippee that si coz I am too cool for school! yaR! *stands proud* :D
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